First a quick update… I have to say I sadly did not manage my 5k day, but I did manage over 1k! So that is something, there is still hope! I know that I can do it! Maybe tomorrow I will hammer out enough to get more caught up! Now, here is an idea that was tossed at me, and this is my attempt. I know that there could be more, and that this can become “something” so let me have it!
This one time at NaNo camp, there was this inappropriate comma! And don’t get me started on the ellipses, stuck where one should never go. The fragments that leave you hanging! Feeling oh so unfulfilled! Or the sentences that seem to go on and on and on and on. The repetition, same words, phrases, and the like, abusing our minds in a manner most unbecoming! And what is with that exclamation point, or is it mark… really, why can’t it stick with the point! I have ta say… really and truly, why can one never get what should be where?!?
I have a few ideas for adding in the dash, question mark, colon, those could all be added, and I would like to think up a few more different grammatical type things. Maybe even create a second little story! What do you think?!? What more does it need? What would you want to see in there?